I have the paper written and as it stands its graded at a 2:2 Id like to get that grade up. My lecturer has advised where to add extra references (highlighted with an R and also add extra information. I dont have much room for extra words maybe 250 max! so maybe some areas need looking at? rewriting? any advice would be gratefully received. Also could you check the references and change it so its not indented (I dont know how to do it!)